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Wow, you just recently uploaded your Mushoku Tensei story and you already reached 1.8K views. That’s pretty impressive for a upcoming fanfiction writer.

So far I can not wait for the next chapter

The novel is great and has intresting characters and setting.It's too early to say anything but there is a lot of potential in this novel...Looking forward to next chapter....

This novel definitely delivers an exciting premise, blending high-stakes business strategy with emotional depth. William’s journey is compelling, and the unique Dominance System keeps the tension high.However, the detailed business sections could be simplified for broader appeal, and deeper exploration of William’s relationships would enhance the emotional impact. Adding more personality to the Dominance System could also elevate the story’s complexity.Overall, a gripping read with great potential that could shine even brighter with a few adjustments.

want New chapter. story is good author done really good job in while writing and creating charchter.... i usualy like family drama type but they all are the same in most if novel but the way author tell about mc memories has a nice charm to it...the one thing i think can be improved is the fighting. it was quite simiple but i guess it was just first fight hopefully author dont drop this novel and i am giving 5 star so that you create more i love it..

I'm liking it so far but is this dropped if not how often is it going to be updated

2nd

Taking the keys out, he opened the front door to his home. It was small but cozy, the living room and the kitchen were in the same division, only separated by a counter that served as the table. The brown couch was against the wall, parallel to the TV hanging on the wall. There were two doors, one lead to the bathroom and the other to his bedroom that was very Spartan, only having a dresser and the bed.